Some good efforts!
I enjoyed watching most of this set of reviews but I dont know whether I saw the whole lot. When I got to a game that said load a song etc and press space bar,
I kept going round in circles and the message kept repeating not loading...
although I did what the instructions said. Is that right????
When it says press space at the beginning press it then the top song press space again and you will then play the game pm if this doesn't make sense
You cant win here!!
If you do something random you lose!! If you do something with a punchline everybody says " oh no not a gag!!" and you lose!!
Well I thought the drawing was good, voices good, and the story , although randomish, was fairly amusing.... what more could anyone want? It was entertaining...
Yeah, it does seem to be a problem when a number of people view your work, and of course you can never please everyone, but it does help to try and understand where they are coming from and to try to understand what they would like to see more of.
I am extremely happy to hear from people like yourself who DID enjoy the work though, it really is what keeps us going until the release of the next one, so thanks a ton for the review!
Not original
It uses the same theme, as "Walk in the woods". If that was a mistake, it was an unfortunate one as that is one of the best and better known animations on this site.
I never saw that Walk in the Woods, I'm going to search it. :X
concept not exploited
I enjoyed watching this cartoon, but felt the concept could have been taken in
more directions other than what seemed to be the violent one. If you included love
greed, jealousy and a few other human conditions that could have been induced
by others. This is probably worth doing again to give it more strength. How you do
that metaphorically, is for your brain to work out. Have I been persuasive enough?
I want to smash my head on a wall right now, but i am too lazy to do it.
got it?
Well done
I liked this animation and it did its job of making us drift into another world for
a little while. To the person who gave you a zero a couple of reviews down, I wanted to say that I am not a cutsie teenager.
haha, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks.
Muy bien hombre.
Los siento pero quiero practicar mi espanol tambien aun que es una mierda.
Me gustan mucha tus ideas pero era una pena que no habia mas botones.
Por ejemplo, no sabia que ha terminado el animacion. Tengo que decirte que escribes ingles muy bien! (disculpa, sin accentos) !)
Thanks, your spanish is quite good too actually, at first I thought you were an actual latin! Hah
Anyway, if I had more time I would totally putted more buttons on it, it was too short and senseless, but I'm glad you liked it.
Thanks for the review, it was fun to read.
It started well...
But ended weakly. I think the animation style was good in the beginning, right up to the point of tripping... The falling down and the head presumably dead could have been better animated.It lacked a sharpness, and was a bit floaty.
Could also have benifited from a few sound effect to give the information a bit
more impact. Not too bad for you second though.
Yeaa, I think my frames-per-second could have been a bit quicker, but then the movie would only go for about 5 seconds. Could you tell me how I can make it sharper? maybe making his arm a bit more jerky and realistic?
I was originally going to put all the sound effects in (typing, computer turning off, falling down etc) but the microphones we had at school weren't good enough to record anything :(
But next I might try to lip synch a character to sound..
Short but funny.
Although this was short it had enough content to be funny and original.
lol thanks a lot
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